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[moonscale]: Its nt hollow, just a sort of film on the surface, its stuck in her headband so it wont affect her.
It is very crude.
[Fizban]: pointless, you have no poisins to coat it with so thats impossible.
[moonscale]: ok, its out.
[Talkris]: Much better.
[moonscale]: Should I write a longer sample post? I read the examples and this RP seems to have longer posts than what I expected.
[Fizban]: Well, I mean you can write a longer sample post if you want...
but no one cares as long as you write appropriately detailed and long posts in the rp.
Its okay to have a few short~er~ posts once in a while, but if you consecutively, and/or consistantly have short posts, then there will be a problem.
[moonscale]: ok
[Talkris]: You know what, go ahead and write the longer post. We'll keep it on your page like we did with filiadorma and use it as an example for when more people come.
[moonscale]: Sadui stood in front of the bar door and licked her lips nervously before walking in with a slow staggering gait. She swung her hips side to side in an unnnatural manner as if she were dancing to some music. Yet even when she passed directly under the loudspeakers blasting a thumping beat she did not react or walk in synchrony with the rhythm. She sat down on a bar stool and spun to face the bar. She sat, looking fornlornly at the other people sitting elsewhere throughout the room. her brightly roughed cheeks stood up harshly against her pale skin. Combined with her luminous white eyes her face seemed corpslike and feverish. "I'll have a martini." she said almost silently. Then attempted to ask again for the only drink she knew. "I'll have a martini!" she said in a voice loud enough to draw attention from her neighbors. She blushed as she saw the heads turn and dug her nails into the palm of her hand. Why couldn't I be like them? Why? She bowed her head, closing her eyes to shut out the pain and lock away their alieness. Her hair slipped forward from under her headband. She sighed. It was just another reminder of what made her different.
[Fizban]: What about auditory, what do you hear? Thats a HUGE part of your character.
what about smell, what does the place smell like?
where did she sit?
[moonscale]: No! I completely rewrote that thing! and i had all that stuff...and now its gone....drat.
Ill have to do it tomorow, its midnight.
[Fizban]: awww,...I'm sorry.
[moonscale]: Sadui stood in front of the bar door and licked her lips nervously tasting the stale smoke in the air before walking in with a slow staggering gait. She swung her hips side to side in an unnnatural manner as if she were dancing to some music. Yet even when she passed directly under the loudspeakers blasting a thumping beat she did not react or walk in synchronity with the rhythm. She sat down on a bar stool in a corner where she could watch the people easily. Sadui spun to face the bar, wincing at the loud squeak that was inaudible to anyone but her. She sat, looking fornlornly at the other people sitting elsewhere throughout the room. She listened with out trying to, catching snatches of conversation from every corner of the room. Have you?...then he...but what if?...maybe...
[Talkris]: Much better, dear
[moonscale]: Thank you
[moonscale]: does she have a watcher yet? I think she needs one...
[Talkris]: Jack should be doing that.
[Fizban]: moon...can you describe what kind of watcher you wanted, I dunno if you said it somewhere else, but its been so long, I dont remember anymore, figured I might as well do this in the down time.
[moonscale]: I dont know. I think it would be funny if it were a guy who wasnt very old and shed alwys act like shes in love with him caus of her humanity fixation. But other then that I guess its whatever you or whoever is going to play him wants.
[Fizban]: okay, I can do something.
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